Yeah. You definitely should :) Just as a suggestion from me, you might as well turn it into a nightcore style song or smth chill... OR you can try adding some dubstep (i mean it has that necessary breaking glitchy sound :) but that's just what I would do :P
Any idea can be turned into great stuff! Just give it some love :D
P.S. no starts cuz da song is not finished. but will definitely rate it after it's done! ;)

So PROOO! U GOOO!! (/*O*)/

Holly wowie! I just love your work! It's so atmospheric! Almost sounds like a soundtrack for one of those Anime AMVs :) big luv 4 dis 1!